Rough Cut - Target Audience Feedback

We received numerous responses for our rough cut from our target audience. These are the following statements we were given:


'Really good nice work for your first proper film.’'

'That’s well good it actually scared me a bit with the music and the black and white display.'

'Also the last shot is the best, good quality camera work throughout.'

' Thats pretty good actually'

'Good use of camera angles and shots, nice delivery throughout'

'I like the tension and suspense that is built up by the music and the variety of different shots however it could be seen more a short film than a thriller opening'

'I think the shot of the male cahracter running up the stairs could be shorter, as it is too long, however the use of the low angles are really well thought out'

'The ending could be seen as a bit too concussive, apart from this the rest of the film is technically very good, the music fits the pace of the piece and the acting isn't too bad'

'I like the pan of the dead body, it works really well on the circular seat, I also really like the shot of the male character in the distance, the variety of shots are all really well thought out and tecnically displayed'